Precious Moments Thank You Cards

I'm 12 and love to write, here is a passage from a chapter in a novel I write.

"Can I keep it?" I asked holding my arms to her. "Of coarse," she said handing me the small package. I moved my head to cover the baby. She was beautiful, his skin a white snow, her cheeks pink light. Her hair, a black light and mixed with chocolate. "It is wonderful, I pick up Julie tell the little hands of girls." You do not have his name now, I'll be here all night, I was not where else to go, "she said, laughing and sat down next to Jasper. "Mommy, why hasn't't Mike came again I asked, I really thought it would come to check up now. "Oh, it will be later, it is with John, probably play cards or something she said to me looking at his phone." Oh, "I knew looking at the beautiful niece in my arms. She was small, skinny little, cute and adorable in all her features. Yet she seemed humble and devoted. His face shows the purity. "I know the name of his" I looked at Julie. She looked up from his book, smiling. "What?" She asked.
'Andrea, because this means even small Humble "I watch the baby when she clapped her hand around my thumb." It's cute, I love "She said smiling at me. I smiled. I was so happy. I love Julie, she was the best sister ever step. "Thank you," I said looking at Andrea.
"I want to hold the baby!" Said Noel overflow. Julie helped him up. He sat on my lap and I put Andrea on her knees. He held her hand. "Andrea" he said, saying his name perfectly. "Okay" I said. He chuckled. After a few minutes he descended. I look little Andrea. "Your so cute I said to touch her little pink cheeks. She giggled. I smiled. She was so cute, the cutest baby ever, perhaps. "Yes, I tell you a baby voice.

She giggled again, I laughed. She began her little legs a little when I tickled his chin. "Little Andrea so cute" I said, kissing him on the forehead. She giggled again. I noticed hadn't't Edward had moved in Jasper. I felt a cold hand on my arm. I looked up at him before falling to Andrea. I was getting scared. I still didn't't not know what to do. I let that thought go and decided to stay happy with the baby.
"She is so cute" I look at Julie. "Yes, it is" She said smiling back. I looked at Edward he sought to Andrea. "You want to keep?" I asked him. His eyes flickered over my face, he smiled a little. "Of course" he said. I gave him to him. They wonder so cute together. His heart is broken. I almost cried. Jasper laughed. I glared at him and he put his hands in the air I laughed and looked back at Edward and Andrea. Edward sat on the bed beside me. I decided to do something. I'm sitting and leaning against his shoulder. It was hard and cold, I care't care I wanted to be near him. It is unfair, why should I be the only one to fall in love with him. I reached my hand up and touched the baby. My mother and Julie looked at us smiling. I looked down and blushed when they looked at each other with. "They look perfectly together" on their faces. I tickled her feet and Andrea laughed, I laughed. Edward just smiled. I would like to take this time. I was afraid he would not be long until my depression has slipped back and Edward did not like to be around me any more. I began to feel sad, but I pushed with all my strength and internal focus on these moments. Andrea was so adorable and beautiful. Edward has been wonderful and amazing, and I was desperate. I laughed at myself. "What" Edward asked Andrea looked depreciation. "Nothing I said reaching over and put my finger under his chin little Andrea. She giggled and cooed. I Looke.